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Friday, April 24, 2020

Saving A Bird

During the outbreak I was watching some TV but suddenly I heard a HUGE bang on the window. I thought it was just my dad throwing a ball at our sliding door but when I peered out to see if saw a bird laying on the ground then I realised the bird hit our window! I quickly got my grandma to see it I opened the sliding door and carefully stepped outside, So did my grandma. The poor bird was sitting with his head down while he was looking down I saw his head was red. But it wasn't from the hit he always had that red head he also had one small white feather. My grandma told me to stay with him until she came back. A few minutes later she came back with a small bowl of water and some bread. She put the food next to him and we both headed back inside. I sat next to the sliding door making sure he would be okay. A few more minutes later he started moving his beautiful red head and he looked at me. Then another 5 minutes later he flew away. Once he left I missed him so much but a miracle happend to me.. A group of sparrows came over to my place cause my grandma and I always left food for them but as I looked out the window there was one red headed bird with one small white feather with them it was my bird friend! I felt happy to see him find new friends with the sparrows and everyday he would come back to see me.. My grandma told me that my bird friend must of told them it was safe here.. Then I gave him a name.. Louis.. And till this day Louis still comes back to see me and it always warms my heart to see him to! :)   

True Story

8 comments:

  1. HI Samantha,
    Wow what an amazing story how kind it was of you to sit there with Louis until he felt better. You are very lucky to have such a special friend that comes to visit you so often. I absolutely loved your story Samantha what a great piece that pulled me in and took me for a ride. Why did you decide to name the bird Louis? I look forward to seeing your next blog post.
    Nicole

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    1. Thank you so much for your comment. That is a really good question "Why did I name him Louis" Well because he's Loving, Outstanding, Unique, Incredible and Strong
      If you put those together it spells Louis :)

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  2. Hi Samantha,
    It was so heart warming to read your story about your bird friend Louis. I too have had a bird fly into a window at my house and it is a very loud sound isn't it. You are so kind to sit with him and make sure he was okay. What sort o food do you and your Grandma put out for Louis and his friends?

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    1. Thanks you Petra. Somewhere in the story it actually says I fed him bread but sometimes our mind skips the words it happens to me to. So we fed them bread :) And we still do

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  3. Hi Samantha

    This is such a great story and really heart warming. The bird must be coming back to say thank you for providing him/her food. I have seen a bird hit the window before and it can give you a fright and you do wonder if the bird could live through such a hit. Maybe next time you write another awesome story you could work on your punctuation. A good way to do this is to read your story out to yourself or someone else, and you will be able to see where breaks need to go. Great work Samantha, looking forward to reading more of your wonderful stories.

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    1. Thank you so much for your comment :) I have been working hard on my making blog posts intresting. Thank you for your feedback I'll make sure I'll show it to someone before I post :)

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  4. Hi Samantha
    i enjoyed the description about Louis, your such a nice person!
    i used to own two pet birds, theirs nothing i could change about this, and i hope that you create more wonderful blog posts like this.

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    1. Thank you for commenting on my blog Heidi. I have been checking out your blog as well and it's amazing!

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